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Poetic Licence: Water sonnets by Henk Suys

Welcome to Poetic Licence – a weekly poetry forum, hosted by us, featuring words by local poets. This week? A pair of “freeform” sonnets by Henk Suys.
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Welcome to Poetic Licence – a weekly poetry forum, hosted by us, featuring words by local poets. This week? A pair of “freeform” sonnets by Henk Suys.

 

 

Sonnet of the Long Distance Swimmer                      

Thick and green as glass, the water at the

bay's edge shimmers like a golden carpet,

sunlit on the surface of the sea.

 

My fingers drip with treasure as my hands

come up for air. "Pretend your elbow is

suspended from a string, just let it swing."

 

The swim instructor's words recalled. Each stroke

in rhythm with this pendulum. Each breath,

for all us mammals of the sea, sucked up

inside a hollow wave, as water streams

below my lips. So close, this salty fluid

and my blood, I could dissolve inside

this shining net and never notice that

my breathing's stopped, and shore floats far away.

 

English Bay, June 9, 1991

 

 

Fraser River Sonnet                                                   

I've lived beside the ocean all my life,

have hands that stroke the water like a fin

and blood that senses when the tide is full.

 

The ocean vast and awesome often echoes

tribulations of my soul in anxious

storm. Or, like a lover spent, reflects

my momentary peace with placid calm.

 

But now I've seen a river madly roiling,

full of need and reckless in its heart.

 

I've felt the trembling of the canyon cliffs

and heard the constant voice of water rushing

like a song, and know my passion is

the call of river seeking ocean, streaming

onward more relentless than the tide.

 

Emory Creek, June 16, 1991

 

 

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